【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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4 ~2 M0 b' u' |我另将歌词附在此。
3 Q: T$ E# F6 w, HThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
" ]0 }% }! \8 iThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
4 A" V0 J( _6 l4 [! {' m6 [We meet and talk everyday,
" v/ }9 ~" W" c( [# YBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
; g! ?5 V+ o! n( ILove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
  }9 Z; e* M& k- O/ H+ }8 Z9 A% ~I want to confess that I love you,
, K1 G* w: z4 l7 }But I never did
' f) y5 P  F2 D1 b* tOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* u6 b) m" a" m$ o! J+ L/ mIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" A  [: H- l- |. D+ D  R! B  u/ sCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
' o; L6 r! P" D& k! Q: p* yWhy is it so difficult to express?
" n7 F0 k: c" Z5 ], DI want to confess that I love you,
8 F# v# n2 ^; f( x$ QBut I never did
' b2 r5 V. Q+ p7 O& i' nOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
0 Q: L. C9 K+ c8 d- E4 mI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
) r4 Z" I1 g& J( a1 w( MEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

$ `" ^" t: d2 |% f. R4 l3 _<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
0 d! B5 b9 R3 Y<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
0 m0 f2 `; r9 [0 x0 I) Y2 d1 m<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
9 @8 d( g: D( A<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
' O. B+ L; O$ N9 D  t/ K+ ?<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
$ ^6 X5 N# T1 R4 |<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
" P9 n0 d) R2 A  t. S+ J, f<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
2 X2 C  |* Z# l% G9 P7 N' Y- m<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
: v: k' Z: K* B6 R+ \! B' b* h<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
5 H" m- z0 L" U6 c<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
8 [, M7 Z+ O' b. p9 v4 X: H1 L<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
+ n# k, \" b- Q+ _8 B4 ~& d+ _<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
- Z" w& F  t7 Z8 X; y$ W, U4 z2 i<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. W2 Y, F! `3 G6 g: W2 D7 r/ z<P>我想说我爱你</P>
8 N, C# i7 o2 P& [* X6 a<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
) i) H' R9 d% J5 r0 E<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( d* t% D& ]4 H. e1 U& c3 v<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 O) B) z! T" G) K- N<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, Q3 X. F# ^: R/ l. ^; X<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( S0 S. T6 T+ j7 ?7 @4 ]<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' S4 R5 O3 z. q+ d<P>Love… just the word love </P>
9 p( _9 h: z' N! }2 ^<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
4 I7 W. z& S" {' ?( |# m<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
. c# e! }0 @: k& m9 }<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
4 B6 ]3 ~0 _5 u/ a+ @0 l7 [<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
9 [0 W/ p  U  Y<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  a7 S$ l2 P) I. F2 {1 c4 Z+ R<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
. V! S! J  G3 K% K9 i% J5 `& I<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 r4 M% ^0 @6 p) K& y2 q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& r2 [8 e% V. o<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 I* k- M. L, i3 l, D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* l7 i2 g6 ?1 R3 A5 _: h; K<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. h# U9 A8 l& r# C<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
# `% I7 C. u1 d, J+ |3 j<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

- T. O& R3 R; L9 S这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 x+ C" ]/ b1 ~' a5 b<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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8 l4 ]7 x( l( s* T& I6 s0 Q3 @<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>