【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODYzNzI=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>
/ X* y6 ]0 J! \) S, U% i$ j

6 l7 j  w3 ~3 {. y我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
3 g5 i! ?' }" m! o* sBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
8 P6 ]( r- _& I" n" NIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 }4 d' k! D2 J8 b4 P* Z' UIf today isn’t too late,
3 T$ m. q, S9 V$ H$ ], OI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: O7 K6 N" O# V2 y, A( tI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
& T( ^" u# M- R, MLove… just the word love
' Y- _; l0 {  W% K+ AWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
" i( k6 \' g$ qBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
/ y  v0 l# l: Q& K' }/ uI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 F5 A7 W) R8 b* d! g9 bCan I entrust it to you?
5 N. E' _! d" \( O+ XEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
: w- W  b6 I7 S% Y- Y4 wEntrust my love within your heart
' H# ?0 J) Z* J, U! _/ @8 `/ M0 h
[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

4 ]4 M/ E0 W" Q$ a6 K<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
7 o6 o$ x5 ?8 d0 T- a, @<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
, k% A! E/ z% A# u* U, |( m<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
8 h# X9 y# g4 H0 ]7 b<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
! ?0 Z1 q0 [+ o. S( V' r<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
/ K5 a( F2 H! w) C2 ~<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
4 o& k7 Z* t9 R" @<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
5 G( Q; K& ?: Z' D/ _3 {2 h5 b3 N<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
' k, K6 p3 t% U/ R! j3 r<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
( M4 }/ S4 U, @- x1 ?4 t) p! P8 ?! v+ U<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
. T" F/ L& t! e9 L- ?0 E: B<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
5 y9 e! W+ T, a9 s5 ^, I<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
7 c' }* @9 k) T, r$ }% K) ~<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
4 e! b* K. X7 V! v<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
4 w# t; a$ @, g+ [4 T; f. v8 |1 _<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
5 m$ {# _8 o( v* [7 `<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
7 G  l6 t0 m! h6 ~<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* Q5 G/ s1 W% x9 `; h* [/ u. ]<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
% g& M! ~& G9 ?; \' \2 g<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- a% i- e" \& g  L* y- k  H4 n<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 h* S+ |1 R  u0 r: V# h: K: u<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# k3 ?/ x' u% _1 p# A- f$ _<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" k. U% w" c; T+ A# |<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
4 M/ D. C) l; D4 {<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
" J  c2 y, k+ w6 r0 P; p% T<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 d+ I: u. g+ ]! t5 P) V3 b<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% _, [  f1 f" s3 r, x<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 s7 z) m( |4 v<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
+ [" f2 Y" Q/ w0 V. y; ~<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
$ s/ W1 I0 F+ a" R, Q
我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

1 c9 C9 X( }9 F5 L7 b9 f这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
7 k- z2 m/ d  @% k6 [( c2 Z<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

<P>

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
8 n% _8 l1 V6 O<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>