【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
! K: J3 p8 l, Y+ W' YI already loved you with all my heart
+ e4 r8 \# ^2 {/ X1 h8 @6 nWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
% B9 j% l  _& B$ m" Y$ l  b4 O9 YLove… just the word love
8 c! D$ z( _4 MWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
, ]8 R: X6 m$ {7 p' ZBut I never did
; A6 z4 u% q+ ]3 _1 g7 [$ K5 o$ n2 DOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) \2 t0 J) i( n& h8 v8 q( cIf today isn’t too late,
4 u) K  s! m/ I# LI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 k& @8 Y: w. {1 x2 vCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
7 j5 _9 F/ A0 ]2 G9 e: mLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
$ ?( S+ R, T. y, w3 o6 H5 p7 B( eBut I never did
8 e9 ^( B/ M2 O4 f: Y$ HOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& d0 _. J. }- l! {% U" q5 l# ^# \3 hIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& E1 R% e. K! n* B% SI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
/ x: F3 {# h/ w& i, EEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
9 Y% l' f. c  c2 ]8 p/ b<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
& Q. ?! [- L' F" ~  D0 Q<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
5 [5 o! o/ |/ ~/ `5 @+ c<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
7 o( I  T0 d; t3 w' b8 O/ i<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
0 N8 ^6 l* s9 a8 U<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
2 X# ~* W$ ?9 P6 V, H) [4 c<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
0 L2 f% [' |3 y# u$ E  ^" w<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
' x- ~/ O) D& v  ?% l<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
, T! N$ M/ k4 m<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
4 p7 Y( p  K$ E+ j4 L1 v0 p/ c* S<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 c# c9 \7 q5 Q3 ~<P>我想说我爱你</P>
5 V& K7 x% y/ `: O# _2 |/ h' z<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
. E% _1 M6 a9 w6 h<P>但我不会</P>
9 y8 j( x2 ^! G( S' F" {<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
9 j7 V6 D* Q1 R) O. [<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% x) n2 Y5 }7 ]<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 m# z$ Q0 B, i1 \- x5 m<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! P8 D% E5 a8 G<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- T9 M) S3 g/ O  m9 D6 z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 a5 `/ w( @6 P7 Y4 G<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
9 g, ]; Y% F5 t3 O3 z<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
0 N7 v; C# ~0 r/ o* h. _: \<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& Y6 D% R7 O! c1 ?<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
) B5 L3 J8 [* R/ s- k6 E. K+ R<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 ^& a. f1 C) B7 J, X<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- K) j0 m3 u  T. c( A! K<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* f( y8 n$ {/ B; L5 P2 k# v<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% \; b' \+ {$ ]1 y2 n( e5 p& D<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" B0 `+ Q% X) B$ P" b+ w<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( j6 G' w: b- O<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) |1 J, d7 T: K, o- x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

! L) Y1 j+ c  o) r# }9 W这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( i, p: [, ?$ V4 V- M3 V' ~<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>