【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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' E4 r8 x4 Y7 w/ z# T我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
( \0 n8 m; _6 P% F% IThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
4 Y' v, o6 |4 M& C, A) jWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
3 S6 g7 a( n( c( t5 s# G0 T' f: }I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
4 M+ y* ^+ z- X9 D4 b' }Why is it so difficult to express?
1 L/ b" A$ F' `2 X, [- F1 I; xI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
9 I& V! i/ ~  t9 V& ^& Z8 A. h) vOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
. R: B4 v& p* ?% YI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
2 f$ [0 {/ ~3 Q* O  L* Y) CEntrust my love within your heart
; [! f3 E4 R* v+ |6 x7 p5 j3 ]Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
, z7 `3 {0 H' EOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 \; f4 H; {' c, o: k  nIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ s( r' x/ a5 q7 J0 }5 u- VCan I entrust it to you?
, |2 v( s: i$ ?( ]Entrust my love within your heart
. I! r4 c  E8 S0 wCan I entrust it to you?
( R( A% ?# x) L9 n' p) N- x, kEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

* n( M& ^  K* B( D<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
" o+ ?1 l/ C7 i) x7 f; P1 ]<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
) X1 z" R: h+ \2 s5 i6 r<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
0 M5 l+ E( h; W! d<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
( p7 a  j* M. ]% t# Y+ r/ \9 D. d3 R<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
  X9 B" m5 r  c/ ]<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
- L- a! G& U# N/ n) a2 k<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
6 x2 D. F6 Y; Y6 N7 H8 u<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! ]& t1 v, B7 t! G2 ]! x<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
) w0 `( w& ?* x) k<P>但我不会</P>
+ E, z& u! Z1 c. l$ c& l3 _/ {7 I<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
( W+ K# l5 A# N* i% j1 d1 ^/ @<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
- D$ u4 p: q; L1 R5 @5 j9 @0 z# A<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 x, Z8 j7 f( e$ h* O8 L<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, e' r1 M6 p0 ?$ v0 L0 y; V<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, X: u/ t8 M$ g# v1 W. }/ n  G  O<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 D6 |$ N1 ]( v3 z. k<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
( j" R6 v! U9 F( ?<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
$ B: Y7 E' c, M. E0 z& X5 h<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
+ E$ E2 E8 {: q3 ^4 F2 b+ t. o<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 P8 R1 t6 R& ?- x  |' s) I* _<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
% i8 E* d$ C. {+ y<P>但我不会 </P>
3 u0 W1 G3 S" n# T3 w& W- Q<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
0 m7 G. x! `- H7 d$ G& R* @0 V, A5 |<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 ?0 k4 T( |5 S8 }$ N/ y/ n' B<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( b& ~2 ^. e" O<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ Y& A* m9 `9 `- U<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, X  o1 D) }( p* Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* ?4 ^% I$ ?' t& h" P4 [1 @- S<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. K- k- k# U# _7 o' n<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
: Q: H9 E. B* \2 ?<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

: n4 r0 ]. T. O7 O+ L9 W, M5 s这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 Y0 o$ ^7 b7 ^' V  [<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>