【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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5 B+ W3 L% {* W, ~3 ^我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
! N1 ?) K$ ]# O0 I0 tThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
% T4 B' @+ `* a" j. yFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
1 S3 ]* @( F: ~: g# J: w1 ?We meet and talk everyday,
9 Z* P" ^$ `1 D" t  a% b2 jBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
8 \& [' W0 ^+ D4 `$ ~# MWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
4 |; B; q' S2 [; L' w0 KBut I never did
) g( S' a$ \: N7 ^1 y/ n( v3 t* AOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
0 Y- Z5 \, h' k& kI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 d" ?3 ^5 x  }3 iCan I entrust it to you?
& B$ X" p" A, \4 n: |' e- REntrust my love within your heart
. K$ c! Z) b8 ~% r% B/ _7 OLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
1 M! u& y- L; ~4 \& L3 V( iI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 o% |5 y+ S& g8 n! E; tIf today isn’t too late,
( B5 x& Q) V" E, v7 ZI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 C6 [. Y) E- D( [8 h+ r5 WI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 W: F+ Q6 f! {7 Q0 l' ~Can I entrust it to you?
4 s6 D( _% i$ ^. t5 @  CEntrust my love within your heart
) E3 h0 G( P9 }3 T9 P- f  a4 q4 |Can I entrust it to you?
1 d3 Z7 g" p# M2 C' Q% r! yEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
$ O; l# E2 I; F$ }, |* \& r<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
' s: E( u# E, o4 C6 @+ D<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
+ o( v1 s  i( s5 R5 H- V<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
0 Q* U- L7 Z7 ^9 F  S0 w$ P<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
. V1 h; n- W5 v1 ^: ~5 \3 Z<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
" u! d! t7 b( P, }6 z% q8 D<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
- n& o; W/ @! u$ S( G<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
) Z- @$ [% @; s) b<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
$ w" S9 d7 r0 Y3 J; G' [7 G<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
$ ~, B" V; C7 E: v; Y/ }" u& ^( ?4 B<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
1 N* d+ M" n9 q" `<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
; n0 h3 ~. f$ X( M  x<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 _" T! `0 x" T+ ?* z$ _4 f<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
/ g, K: [- ?5 w4 @9 L. `6 m+ _6 g<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ i: Q/ R5 N; X4 p<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& T: e7 J2 B8 j+ _& C8 b5 m7 `! p0 w<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ W  |+ I7 @3 K- s. G& s& H, ]<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
+ Q" _, J2 }- Y1 d  ?<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
+ r  I8 |  J4 j5 q<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 u$ q! E; b3 q& Q5 C5 a4 _<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 G) W# a8 u  H<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
% T+ b* R, W( Q' h0 ]<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; U! ~8 O0 n4 G! B5 r  r$ F<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 ?  q* f7 X( S- N<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
3 L! b: v1 u5 P. G" U9 E, z<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

* ?; R5 v, C. g: K' W, r5 u' G% z这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>