【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
# [$ X. h5 |& N: h; g" A% aThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
! G1 f+ B! W- Z- }# \That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
5 `! ~" u( E. t$ M9 e8 z6 HWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
9 n0 S& v* T, \1 GIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
2 g* e- o3 X( vI would probably know how you feel
, y, o* E  P' {- S' R- G* k3 wLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
$ h. R4 f; y6 v' f/ a; ?' z" G1 Z+ \But I never did
$ ~. `3 K! r0 |0 tOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
8 X+ n( |: C8 W( f. W7 X2 }Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
1 M) u6 k2 Q8 x8 eWhy is it so difficult to express?
4 h1 s6 {5 \4 G, S2 mI want to confess that I love you,
6 \( t) t1 [4 Q* iBut I never did
3 b& V* j, h- S! LOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  d$ C, ?2 z4 H0 e* U* c+ \If today isn’t too late,
% X! i+ r, m& b7 c0 [I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 ~' w( J+ q6 pCan I entrust it to you?
+ z3 t0 m. m0 r2 O- N0 ]Entrust my love within your heart
. L3 M4 d; G7 o% q* F! WCan I entrust it to you?
  [- I5 g" y" A% `* eEntrust my love within your heart
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6 n4 C! H* D6 [; ?[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
3 S" K% ~8 ^5 v  B! R8 M" `<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
' U/ ^; k; B2 h* f5 {<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
  H9 V1 b- H: S% M( C<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
8 m. I5 e4 A  y; E<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
: I7 w" m& A# S, k  G/ |<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
% o0 Y) k7 W9 V$ a3 z, `<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
& j1 G3 R& Z- k0 _; o$ q7 [<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
9 O/ Y( `  M2 c( [' ^<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
6 _# f: M) E# p8 O/ k  p1 g$ n<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
& E5 x$ p1 z8 X" W- G<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 v/ i1 C+ o1 @<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
2 ]4 @9 H0 v) p' E<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 x4 h# z$ f" b<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 b0 _* L/ y! _* Q: D% D) X<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
. i9 i0 i4 S7 g' d<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  M; p% ?, R* ]1 I7 O, f$ |<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
4 B# C. s: n& F7 m' i% e1 F$ O<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
. y0 v5 J. ^5 M<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ }' C2 I1 H, R% E) z/ F0 l<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( x! }" x6 {/ b2 C<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" y; b8 c/ c. Y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
* _# {4 r9 h* P, q6 h9 V& [; I<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ U" @0 o' A6 B& x8 U7 p<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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0 S. p8 d6 B& A& ^! G2 p. {这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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3 g- S8 X7 s; U5 U) }/ Z# n4 g7 h, `- i<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>