【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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5 I. y! }, \( r* g$ _我另将歌词附在此。
6 b  Y6 n% Q* W' T- j6 u# e( kThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
( E( t# K. f* p8 U8 [: b$ b/ kFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
5 J' ?; m4 c/ VBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
& O* {0 p! l% P8 v3 C" S( @I would probably know how you feel
3 g; F2 s" a/ k1 d8 R. mLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
2 i: v, e' u0 e4 R" ?One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  ~; ]: i9 g  n  v3 _( P, ZIf today isn’t too late,
3 L7 T. i  c7 n  CI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 S9 @6 a3 H9 |# I! B/ h6 \3 iCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
& G: a; G' y9 n8 O: H5 RI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
6 X' H; b) ]9 i  N- |I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  Q1 j- G: m5 S: I- X+ G5 R, d4 s8 oI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* j& S0 J  u/ b+ u+ w; CCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
; E9 \$ n, p7 s! @8 qEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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3 H2 S% a4 l6 w+ Y1 h<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
$ g! l( B0 K0 p, O* z, k" m<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
4 p3 b! S: A& B7 S9 z* K<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
' r6 t0 G! w7 j! ?! p1 o; j$ I<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
4 e- L' M- Q; K3 x<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
; V5 w$ z8 T+ K7 Y" L( |; L  P7 n<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
( v5 d1 E- D1 D8 v' s6 E+ @( e3 |<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
! g' e( n' f, y2 h7 t8 X' {<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
# a' z" J4 u: |) A<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
9 Y; R+ m# E# h# t. g+ [<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
" m6 ?( b% t7 V" q( X<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
+ [6 }7 H' x# C5 M# r# ]<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
# C5 c, a; X* B6 Y5 e. V* H<P>但我不会</P>
$ q  I2 ^! }0 ]' }* J# `" F<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( Y* y7 S4 J7 y* L5 p<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 Q6 \3 [3 j& A2 A9 M8 g$ [<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- f. W' ?/ c" X( Z3 a6 I0 b( g<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 x, |( P; Q8 M3 X) D<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 R2 z6 b- R0 C  t<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 A* c9 g3 \8 ?$ v& C' s+ E<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% _# E! `" U- ^+ T. ~! g<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* `* u) M' \+ B$ O: c<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
6 o0 x7 w' H  y( h, r8 U6 \4 ]: U<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
' b5 I' l. w( W<P>But I never did </P>
1 V& A" n# g0 Y7 |8 S& K+ d<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
9 \1 h# I+ z# E<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 ?8 k$ D+ N; p; y( l8 E  a<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! b( [/ w+ E' F/ d) L<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ X6 u, j' x$ O0 V& ]1 X4 N<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! k1 S' Z' A6 A$ x  L" ^<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* ?0 P0 e+ X# o" J2 x<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 D! T: H4 \# K, A* K0 _9 |8 |<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
9 E. e; D+ d0 t. R<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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3 D5 f9 T( j. m- p% [<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>