【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 C2 A' I1 `2 p& aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
  ~/ R' P" ?! T9 I7 P  DMaking the sky glitter like gold,
6 v5 L5 e& p5 m# B* f7 _( g. s% T* RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 m  b+ ~; J+ Y5 VThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
7 t9 t" t, O( B; rSeeing the sky content with its love
6 F2 V+ n) d5 J4 J' o2 r. y5 U+ G5 kIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
6 [9 S5 H; X& D5 ~4 mI really want to know just how much you love me
* {8 n: q) S9 ^  II love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 o9 v; o& _/ C8 q% y; cThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; L) P6 g, a2 r' AI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) T% m6 V/ W* |I’m still filled with fear
2 h, i+ F$ @. m) O9 s* rYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! j5 Z8 k5 e5 h# Q! RRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) d: x1 z" O- ]& S<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, Z+ Q& C; ^# k, W4 z& I' v+ L) F<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! a0 c, w9 {# ?' c3 M' h$ @<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( {5 N7 c5 ~- F, u* i3 V<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 `: W* |/ t+ T<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
( g! }* k* V  M( T, p$ t+ F<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) `" }3 C  l/ g9 N& g6 ]<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% D3 G+ v. W+ o<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) m4 O7 U' Z# ~* H<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 O+ T7 |3 P/ b. m<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- R9 s9 z) v, ^  A0 R<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 L" [: j% p$ M4 L; b<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ Z( z$ X% C/ x* y7 Q" ]) I( I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 e. D( @8 v7 d7 d# V: ^0 @0 r$ J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. n$ ?, }2 v# a; o2 \/ V' h1 E<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 c2 S2 I! u7 c+ r, p3 I<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 W2 B: v* q$ A; H6 {. K; n<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, \' @" o4 Y% s7 T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 k3 ]1 p7 w: Q8 t  B: ]<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! Q3 |' U+ n7 T' [+ e<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. G1 N+ Q2 Q* W" w& K- Z  ^3 }: f<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 E0 p2 B" ?4 o2 k4 g% H<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 a  i! X# J2 L- J<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ P  |( }6 ~# P- `* s6 K5 ?<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ ^4 X% R: Q+ c/ J+ H! J8 \8 H<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' t2 }8 r6 E/ V<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' ?4 H( L& s; U0 B& g8 r* I<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>