【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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- [( X( o/ Q/ {0 P4 Y0 T歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
" P8 N: L+ w* j  s7 FMaking the sky glitter like gold,
/ k. I% @3 x" X4 j# Q5 a6 p' a; JWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 y& Q0 J6 s/ x+ I' OThe sky is happy down to its soul
- Z6 i1 j' e- z( h* k- y( K1 pWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
+ A0 T4 J; }) U' vIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 a, g9 r) ^$ @/ g/ Z* f/ FEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- b/ g% G6 g* N0 }Nothing can compare to my love
' [, o8 R' Z$ X6 x  i2 v- l: \3 O( zCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 p1 H( }  H- x9 jI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& x- S+ S  V& RI’m still filled with fear
: i& X0 x: q; u# w# |. s) P8 _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
  c- E0 f  Y$ N. y6 D, t, jI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 U8 M) j# p7 j; ~0 p) w1 AWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
( i) o0 u2 ~* R) ]* v2 w9 z9 fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' X# q, F, N+ g( r5 e<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 @3 N* E  T/ [6 X2 o8 X<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 T+ s  p; O6 T<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" x+ k: P8 v. A. {( o3 k<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" }$ W) S4 S+ m3 I( B$ k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' o; G4 H6 y% l+ y* k<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' t! n% c. r0 e" q4 M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# `* K  n8 |8 @" g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- [; O/ L# f6 @# [0 ^<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- U5 C7 {" X$ A" }0 H<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ [) B4 A4 X- a4 r<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( N# D- \9 T3 y( l' a* V) a( z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" R- l; P6 {2 |, Z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& e" E( r3 K! N2 \3 Z  R, `<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 N. p# q8 z% _, C3 v) D1 W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 M6 D' z2 a, j$ c6 l! n; n7 X<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  r' P) Y$ D: B<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ X* }; p9 J! k& b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ ?0 y8 J/ ^" `. T. _9 p<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* J, w4 U9 \2 f4 {9 U+ L5 x<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 V5 [. T, r( g5 C+ ]' z! P<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 _: Q. M% G9 ]<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ P. z: W: l3 u9 A0 j<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 z! C2 k1 ^4 _<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- p% N" w: o2 l( ^<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! t3 e4 a8 ]7 d  U' Y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! a+ m/ Q4 q  W, i( L9 _<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( R. J* w/ A  s* j* z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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4 b# G3 a: I( C# x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 X. v, y" |: [! {6 W" l<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>