【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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. [: T5 b6 z0 T1 m; |: B& Y歌词我附在后面。
' M; S/ Q  h1 l8 a& {8 A: o+ \, UThe moonlight is shining brightly,
) F1 w1 n2 ^( P7 t1 M% L/ X3 E, _; x' EMaking the sky glitter like gold,
# Z3 V+ ~+ P% q2 rWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 h/ t* q, U8 O4 j! e( e# O/ @  @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 Y; k1 L/ I  LThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. |. X9 q2 f2 ^% {4 z* O2 CYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' |! l. |/ {: aEvery other word you utter is love
7 W1 M# l: u9 l2 {5 e& {I really want to know just how much you love me
$ [7 x9 m6 }. I" D% f* sI love you I love you with all my heart
$ a1 f" r! g# k$ ^2 y* hNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' Y4 G  _4 x5 {7 SThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 L9 d! O. T. |9 U# j2 Y+ m- |I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
( c% h$ @* \; X. j- j$ R8 P' e# `Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) P! p& o  q% t/ R, qI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
  {0 U* p. W7 Q% B7 \: C/ BYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

9 q4 `" J  }. Z, G' I! c! ]<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; V. a, l+ q+ u& ^<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' }8 ~5 O" |) J( R' a# H: F, {; E<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ Y( |+ W: V+ a8 z5 c! X' V<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: V' E; d5 E1 A. `! l& @' W# }<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 K; Y8 o, z, H0 {& f( B. N# y! h; U# `<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 Q; a% ^5 _$ K2 ~# {+ J0 Z2 ^<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 S2 }( d7 {1 p" {& f6 _<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ N5 S$ F( u* Y% A) i) m<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- T$ ~0 D% d3 \% [, v<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 @' J" m# V) \  {0 A5 y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# J, p) \' t$ X, t. ~* B! x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 l' I1 t0 p: f  H5 m- t( k! w# Q( I<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" B- A7 t3 _2 Y; u: M% y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& q8 M$ T: |( N: t: J9 B! \<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, v) M4 u/ P' `; R: q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ f/ S* A; {& H( d( {- A! V5 [<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 ^2 M& ^) ^4 t: T5 M: e7 w<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 N3 ^& Z# L# D; U<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" J  i* j$ }2 s; \$ M<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 q& l( w0 m. W<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: [  A; _% x8 `5 X5 a<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

9 V  f% g$ l; P4 R我请你剖开它
' @6 M+ a: ]& N6 a
) K: I: k$ n2 I3 X/ d 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>