【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 \) J1 g4 m) ^- m歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ Z+ ?" b$ Z4 y" s3 o4 w  w: fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- d* q) V# S9 n. r3 x7 v+ z6 ^The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 i9 J" \) `* Y( _1 W! FThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# U: v* f( \7 `5 d& q0 ~& fYou needn’t fear anything
+ V" ^' a+ c  Q2 LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
9 P1 l. @& F9 ]9 i5 jI really want to know just how much you love me
: I' _; s" U7 b% N& q( dI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
8 _1 Z: |' y& W0 K5 u" g8 E  N( SCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 ]  E& k) R/ d) d! BThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: r; b- Q5 H* ~) o9 FYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ l; B6 y7 n3 V' I' P4 S7 d) b2 TI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, s, {$ _6 R8 y/ |5 k7 y) U0 J4 \With such a tongue as yours,
! ^. g7 i6 c$ L& l. E# oYour speech can’t even keep up with it
0 {7 K. p3 V! N1 Q) l2 `If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, E5 ?# @( ~; z1 t3 _8 x" d3 Z% d5 eRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 {1 q# t$ A+ S, N7 H% y' Q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 t8 @7 |/ w' e  O<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, ?6 q. A; x" k& q8 b+ T4 u: N<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 R! J7 a! ]2 b3 X<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; B( d" {6 I( j<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ V$ T# ^6 e7 f& b7 D% D3 G<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# O1 F# n- y; a! f# S, M6 X" Q& U0 z8 D<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 Q% ^4 X3 ^" |& y: B( n# l<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ q; B# ]+ M9 J! f<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- M# K# Y  R9 ?" v& u% c<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ Y/ A' h  K% S6 y( P& I4 x, O<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 j- s" ]0 M* S<P>你无需担心</P>
$ c3 u, k  {4 n  u<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; I; N( U: ~, C, \<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- j. q  p2 I4 [. w5 R0 ?<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ t7 \- _! @, z- x<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 N' q! H1 _6 l, Y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 E. K* Y2 `8 ~8 H. L; {* Z, e- w' D% V<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 `* ?! ]7 U0 P$ o4 `% X  u<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- K. l' R2 w% ]$ j  X<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 a5 d& K) M$ j% w* ^: c$ A<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! m- q; B3 m$ Y- }$ w/ t  Q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, d1 x! x2 h/ X/ d( M6 W& g' A<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 L, x) D! M1 s! M1 R1 H& `( {( @<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 a5 g# l# n' D) ~/ i3 p4 K<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ M: }9 {% ]1 a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: r2 S, U6 l6 f( @+ \<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 v+ J8 w0 f/ X: u, A<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 b* S) X3 L. l- W4 {4 M8 z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" m- \- q" v+ s6 c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' j+ \+ |2 B" w/ w  O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>