【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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! p3 W3 k( \( ^4 Q8 Q歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- F# e6 J1 a' I5 b. YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% p1 i  m( x' g, z' AWith the moon kissing it every night
- t8 U# ?$ t) x" y8 b% W$ \Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 ]) F- N3 F) ]$ s  q6 G7 zYou needn’t fear anything
5 s" ~4 ~( l. h6 v, ?0 WMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
6 S! V! d% V: |0 NI love you I love you with all my heart
3 q0 E; e2 V% f3 r, ~0 q* w1 \Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ ]3 D# m! a- x3 Z5 ]The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
) c/ Y/ S( v% _. p& K; A7 _. HI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
7 M0 P4 z, i7 L. E' f- j. HI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ X" e" v$ \) I2 j. _- P5 W2 y% qWith such a tongue as yours,
' G7 Y: ^: f& Q! F: m* iYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

/ ?( g- c0 |2 @: X& s, e<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% J" r4 {- q# m- e2 Y& D<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ t# M1 r" h# Y, O( \+ U& N<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 }* u5 R# I& m! I. S' m<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" J( ?; b3 m4 A( B- V3 ?7 M<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# j5 t' i1 k( Y& c: v3 M<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# s( U6 d) X4 D! H( J: Y2 f. ~<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ j4 X1 E8 f# ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 w# e/ G* ^) G- `  [( U<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# Z" d+ D! N7 X" R" _, C% g; h1 Z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, I' B2 Z& N% ]& U: @<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ `4 D3 O& D0 F" s" r9 X$ s  G<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. A7 ~& h2 g: R% e) U& h! @7 T<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' c7 i/ o6 s4 ?. I/ L; p, ~/ X8 H<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 |3 H: B. y( g/ e% n5 G<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! J4 {! E' ^( r& a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( [0 S3 q$ @% u<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) J4 a6 M+ b, M7 @! }! S4 Y" E<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  N4 {0 Q" W( D; b6 p# m<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 N, _# |' E3 ]3 r; G- L<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ i6 l8 G% \  e0 |5 M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) G6 z1 v" W% E& W% r" s<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, s, @, t. M5 F" E- [<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ c5 _/ r% O2 O  ]- f; v<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& L+ @. g+ I9 ?0 e; s3 M<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) n: L; w& f& l( R  j& M. U2 s* \<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 P" @) W- j5 M; j  A8 l9 p<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 v8 g- a& u+ ?9 n& }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 I0 y# B7 \& h+ Q<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( g9 m3 }/ e/ Q& f4 u( m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 e3 V. H0 g9 n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 A$ }6 Y5 E( d" k- E<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 \4 P* l1 S$ E9 q5 q- C% E3 k% w<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 S% @) d, H2 x! n% i) B2 j' ]<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

  l5 r7 _5 T) Z$ i' S 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>