【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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9 [- x  |3 p4 ~) A歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 S2 ]2 f9 }8 y; f: uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 e/ A" R4 R/ CThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# T# r0 Q+ i7 lThe sky is happy down to its soul
3 t* p9 g" i9 `% ^- |) }& ~With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! x! t3 b& N7 r) d7 F( p- oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% P9 \/ ~% b( H( Z1 ]8 Y6 s3 IYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: c3 j: d+ H2 O6 F- H% pEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
+ `7 {6 r; f5 v% y2 YI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
2 I. C5 m. O  YI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% O. P! d% m4 r9 CI’m still filled with fear
$ c  E! J4 A$ W; u$ D/ ~& g- _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 Y5 o( x* U4 s" `/ i$ r* X% sI regret not dying
6 a# o7 k# |# B7 |/ ~* L$ LI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
9 X2 J8 N" S1 G" j2 W8 S" F& FIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: }' c" s, ~- G+ N: k<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  k6 g6 t. @/ ]! A( O& a# X<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 d1 A% {  [2 ?$ e. y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ O# b+ k% W# m% V: C<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 s& d' O% ]( l2 p$ ^" E" [<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 W3 D: T6 F% c% X4 }5 M/ _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' ]& Q. s0 h1 T9 t1 H, M: F- @' ?<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* M  s% w- p9 b4 p4 Q8 K<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  p7 \$ G0 b2 C<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 D9 |* L! P8 l<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& B3 r+ I8 ]. W' q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 R, J1 ~1 g; F4 _<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* @7 N* a' ?+ g5 `+ O; y( W% I# R<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 o2 {7 M, |& \0 L% V8 L<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- m. @% X5 W0 L& J, f<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# I$ v) m! z$ I) n7 ?<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 J* @+ R, e, {( e$ Q% c2 p<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' H+ L& M# q  a) ]. m' c2 |<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>