【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  o/ X, C; |$ k* b$ aWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 Y; h2 ^0 o% L% B* dThe sky is happy down to its soul
9 Q- {) x' B  r9 G& e+ Y; I# \With the moon kissing it every night
9 Z8 X; K' L3 T# j$ x) ]8 _8 O0 i9 iSeeing the sky content with its love
. v- S0 B/ H1 s! l/ W+ qIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ E/ b' s3 |  r; ]! JYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. o: r* n2 Q1 ^Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* k! s- I% S2 C! W# U# X5 F% ~* TI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
! l4 a% q# `- R& a3 ~, N6 BCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! u& o. Q2 V/ f2 n# eI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. c* B* C; Z: W, n9 y4 u8 z% Y4 ZWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" Z" C8 D8 n$ ^/ ^7 NIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* z' a: l2 r/ \2 K! q" mRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& C- J+ |* L, K+ k6 ~+ ?, l<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! ~( T# K0 }( l: R& ]<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 a9 c* F' g, M2 X; }4 \<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ k$ h5 N+ a( i7 h6 J<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% y* g( c+ U: P, N. v( g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) b0 L! t; B/ Z, |6 `+ H<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) M3 p+ |& j2 D2 O. R+ ?+ w. X! D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& T$ c- r# h1 x4 i: ^9 U5 x3 E$ {% h<P>你无需担心</P>
- B( }/ Q8 r# g( Y; R* P<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 w3 U6 w  Q" |0 t0 ^5 |<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 r! J1 q; Q* }9 M) s<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 Y6 F% a9 ]  G( G8 b<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- m: H% ^( C$ ?) d<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% j% k0 p: v3 [+ T<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- C% V' Y! n5 O! q9 V<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# R9 E3 Y" y5 a- |  b$ @<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& h8 d5 L% d: Z6 r) F<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 v; j( K: ?& u. n: _$ W<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" H5 `" }0 `, b( {0 M5 @! |/ ^<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ R7 \' v9 j& h: h& o3 x0 |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; p6 u: X) h0 t& f2 o8 m5 X<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( B  w2 z- c7 ~<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 D" N, W6 [7 Z7 g) v8 D<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 v, ?6 x) i6 a" x& w$ j! E<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 G1 m8 n- M# n0 r! Z% c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 c+ u7 n! o$ ?' P$ Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; M) l+ W  t: F+ v5 S<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. n. Q$ b$ t  A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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& P, M* G, U( u  i& e! K" i% e2 x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>