【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! L4 A9 D$ J/ J: U/ K% [6 s( P3 oMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ y: b  k! h# b/ P" S' ZThe sky is happy down to its soul
% S  j0 O5 @: A$ YWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
1 Z7 ^4 [% y" z- e) kIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 n8 h) I4 q$ T( K" nEvery other word you utter is love
7 ~" N' S/ F2 B6 r2 y3 e; s' T. K/ NI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 n( c% O( M5 V5 I& X# F( aNothing can compare to my love
/ R  N+ V6 P6 zCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
* o7 S9 x: }1 @I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 M7 R/ r, s' p4 K) R* O5 M4 uI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 r/ @) T5 F# Z7 W- z' X: EWith such a tongue as yours,
: w0 c* k" ?4 m5 v! PYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- t# }) T3 N- U. V$ d+ t5 j8 kRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

' a' \0 d0 h. g. A+ y$ Z# C<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 \" H& i+ U# C  {; o<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 S- K4 }; Y0 S3 I$ c<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 |3 _+ R  y* Y. F2 c( b" _<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. q5 o( C! h+ I$ i6 H$ R8 ~4 _<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) T7 s9 r' k; z+ |6 r<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 ^! C0 F; Q! q  G; V: z  k! x- D<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% c" N+ z% A) t0 l<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
, X9 d7 J: n4 Y& r9 @$ D1 K<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& w. }  X; D* g<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" T9 F  ]2 v  }0 J<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  [: ?( L- y5 f8 `<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 n/ z8 g6 \0 Z- K<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- ~+ M# Z0 Q5 Q' d7 I( ~; V<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 X7 Z. W, p8 u. g! y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ N5 l( n0 i% W( x+ {2 U/ T<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 i, B2 d8 [* a* c8 v0 t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. j6 O5 P* q  C; l  p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 z& R& Q& T5 j; ~2 p<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ l5 c, s+ P" p! z/ K/ l7 _9 p  n<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ c1 R5 l& ^! ^2 b) j" f<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 y0 y- {. f. X2 E9 ?<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 C6 @  _( H6 d4 ^( p8 @; e) W<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 I$ U/ m. f; v8 J% [<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 x" v6 g* o) l/ J* _<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) |% o" `) L* ~- k0 x8 f) _. p<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ ]. B. m6 `& x* O3 A# H<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- d2 d+ }# G" m8 t8 ?% G3 k<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% h( M0 c1 v( |% M# H<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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3 R$ F; w2 \- W9 `6 i我请你剖开它

& u$ u4 p: y1 c/ y# g+ l$ Q, A# o 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>