【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ d0 R' q8 G' M( R0 q* _) ?The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
, i" l; x0 ?: n+ H$ F( eWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% f# M. f0 q" x8 W  z) @It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! Y3 V4 }( d$ n$ z$ k4 `; J8 KYou needn’t fear anything
5 b( v2 I% h+ ^' f5 mMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 i/ c: m, ~- jEvery other word you utter is love
( {( G1 l& J( X& nI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# I0 m, p: @) l; [+ L6 z5 m  w; p0 m* LNothing can compare to my love
4 S4 B6 }% A. kCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 s  i& |# B3 p- E* ^# |I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 J! P5 v1 k1 G) ]" t: [I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* v2 S8 k+ _. EI regret not dying
1 ?! h% d6 G3 N, A$ R2 ~I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: ]  w$ ^/ \2 v( A; @1 zWith such a tongue as yours,
) Z/ e: P# h0 w% n, FYour speech can’t even keep up with it
* n& g9 A1 E8 F( m" [If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' s1 H) @. _, K4 m. ?& j<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* F- `. X2 Z! ~- D$ C<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) x5 X6 k/ Q4 R2 f4 q: E<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. W. A3 E6 c- v$ y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" i+ h( Z; d4 x* s5 t<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) @) D  w; r. C- R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* q+ h4 S7 l  a  P) L9 n<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* E' r# Z$ F8 S# y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, ~: {. t6 R7 x, w<P>你无需担心</P>
) g2 h5 p2 ~$ ?2 @<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" u! Z% f  ^& E( x) u4 m<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; m+ i5 f) o' L! a' e6 B( ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. a) {; ]. O' J, e% V: O<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# M$ _) T- y& R- S<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& w* D% X* a* m" R. t<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* ?" z  x- ]& A, m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, \) B  z3 {% s7 a; ~<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# F( t) a% Z4 M; `4 B# B* q1 h' u<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' S  @) {, d; d5 T# ^<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ Y. {. c  S) _6 O6 s2 |0 ]7 Z" |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 |6 ?% u' Q# w: I<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- b- e9 g  ]2 \2 ~) M5 n* ^: g<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, P+ N# V& m$ I2 }5 s; j' z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 X7 d5 y% E7 f<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ @% y/ _) r1 ?8 [, j<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 h# F, k) l0 U1 v+ P* N/ N<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( c4 K% ]; Y% y5 s5 F+ o9 z7 z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 P! U; V  Q, n5 U' C<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 e. t4 P; N+ V- Y  h<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* {7 q5 i: e5 c' ?- i8 w$ M<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>