【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ r7 s: @+ J* S1 q. Y6 G& s" HWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! C# E& Q. r. R) fThe sky is happy down to its soul
+ ]  \  a0 c2 LWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- p: l/ ]9 S  I! A- D. mIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 r& e1 E+ K5 J- l& l$ lEvery other word you utter is love
/ m3 S! u- w" Q$ b; l! i1 Z% eI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- _/ b/ w. u) d% {5 s5 ~+ W3 T6 G) iNothing can compare to my love
- ?2 U5 C8 [0 ~7 [* I& {# GCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 Y% h7 y" g7 rI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  T, u- X6 }2 V! L. l. `I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' s' ^& T$ Z/ ^( @# K$ iYour speech can’t even keep up with it
  A2 Y0 S& N4 J! f: }! dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 @: G3 C! n* I" oRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% o) p7 V6 H2 j. i; f<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 V- U3 o# e# I3 C5 g<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 u. V7 O& g/ V: `# _<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ u9 L2 B, H* @) {<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 r5 S4 n2 |3 J& t( r5 g8 [2 a<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ A( b$ [5 y' ]: J" V, R4 W1 i<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( K( X4 O- z* f8 {: O5 P<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 f# R. [9 C" ^4 m4 o( u* e" B- ?<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: i& U8 _. Z; P8 p# k: }% x<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 _; D1 l1 D9 f' _/ b/ S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* O$ F% ^2 m2 U: y. ~& p9 J<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 w* N8 R6 p1 d3 N. Q2 Y( p% N<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 V* W# K% H. |9 |+ J6 s<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 M1 z/ [: \) z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 b0 ~( Y  k8 U/ \3 g2 u<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 u/ I: z5 L6 t+ F( C- X<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- m: k! p% R8 }" [" p" @<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# Q! z8 Y7 |( I( V& W: U0 u8 W; _* F<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  h4 {0 k& q6 v: D1 a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. e( ~$ z8 w- l( M* o<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: H/ X/ h# O6 R" D<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, |  r1 D( f1 v7 ], O4 X  c7 c<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' Z) E1 k4 i4 T. G  B) e! W<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 M5 G! i, y9 z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 v+ M. U# x- [5 h5 P" p2 D$ F  ?我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>