【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

- s$ d: t# \- A0 D" \. g4 }( X一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
% ~4 {; _# S: B% Z  c& T2 N  I. Qvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

; @' z/ p) m- _5 O: z再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ Q; `4 m9 S2 F$ |皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
/ j( a2 }) ]1 ?  k+ l8 k( bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; m" k5 q- U$ J* z夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂
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: m2 q! |$ J7 e% EWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ i" {- n; S% D+ t. t( P凝视明月 我心欢畅
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 \1 d: b8 ^6 v7 }/ U2 Y; A月光闪烁 在我眼中
$ s1 z, _. P8 F* R( xThe sky is happy down to its soul
7 Q% P* k* [) q一片丹心 照耀夜空

' ^- \1 j& T2 F/ R3 l  DWith the moon kissing it every night
& Q: {3 K) D" S4 e& z# Y  ]看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
; `' R9 }) `: |Seeing the sky content with its love
" U9 n7 U  V' b" ?- }" W% S夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
+ u2 d3 p/ J8 E. D+ \: t- w( jIt fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
  l) u- _, M. D% eYou needn’t fear anything
) ?8 [6 B/ ]6 b怕这怕那 又是何苦
+ y7 r. g$ a5 A) ~- O: ]5 \My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% y: ]! U, x5 a& n我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
Every other word you utter is love
: A6 I/ T% h! K- c口口声声 说你爱我
I really want to know just how much you love me
真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
: w- {- h" n/ A1 H6 A0 o2 {5 pI love you I love you with all my heart
6 w8 F! h7 R  W$ L% A8 V. G% a; O爱你爱你 全心全意
+ Y9 ^2 @3 E( G2 ANothing can compare to my love
世间万物  皆不能比
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. k! ~, e# \5 X$ g& N: fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ C3 ^* W. ?2 u4 [6 v' W能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
I want so much to see inside your heart
我真想看透你的心
! r+ |/ t# Q# o: O7 {/ }I invite you to rip it out
你尽管把它掏去
2 n+ d% w9 b+ Q1 kTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ t% p1 U, a: i# q) I7 i若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
. q2 U' u* W% {, R6 h; P! d* U" sI’m still filled with fear
可我依然满心忧虑
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
I regret not dying
& C# B& c, t. A, f真恨不能 以死明志
- ^9 _% c4 {# w' w' wI only have one tongue
! `4 a( G4 l7 i# |$ b我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
2 g+ Z6 u; y0 w) e' |( tIt’s nothing close to 100,000
也恨不得  多如千万
" ?- r1 L, P; a/ w( a6 V# {With such a tongue as yours,
你这张嘴 真真厉害
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; f, J- B( a( p& F5 l9 J8 Y能说会道 无以伦比
" |* I9 L7 J. q% B# sIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
Rambling on about a thousand words of love
向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲

1 N' e. W3 m- s; p; N8 z# G: TThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
从未向你吐露衷情
' N: \5 s3 w" ~. eThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
8 E- R& A3 u+ e2 d! y; c; Y/ q爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
From the first moment we met,
: z9 c+ A- f# Y5 K  X对你一见倾心
I already loved you with all my heart
, B3 M/ O; F0 |, `( y# e从此别无他意
We meet and talk everyday,
/ V$ [! }3 m$ H# ~! a你我每天见面寒暄
5 B" k/ o' y1 o* Y& F& d2 Y& u" WBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
奈何从未谈及内心
# Y% C( o+ [/ s& l3 q. C) [If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
4 n' \$ z4 R3 }9 g( b4 v- W1 e1 dI would probably know how you feel
1 X, {% t8 x2 X或能知你心意
Love… just the word love
9 M, X0 t+ J, d2 G! S+ T爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
" T2 ]# ]5 j1 N为何如此难言？
, T& ]5 G# M. f: w3 e5 @+ o" MI want to confess that I love you,
# u8 ]' G# ?9 r8 m) D我多想向你表白
But I never did
9 X" e( _  \1 r8 M却始终未曾出口
( G4 P5 l" H' r; m6 fOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 x3 \( ]2 M' m! y只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
( E( }( p; R- Q! |( ?I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  M& M/ t& T& Q# O今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* @" X( V- R5 e+ d$ \7 L! M不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
. }3 q! \0 ?$ F& I可否将它 托付于你?
Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去
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Love… just the word love
3 f) h$ ^" N, ]  O; V. s爱呀，爱就一个字
* [( E. {4 V/ _6 yWhy is it so difficult to express?
为何如何难言？
2 R3 J! N( f# D" E- a% h+ ~' @$ CI want to confess that I love you,
9 ~  K: C( H, i* g我多想向你表白
! i0 Y9 b. y7 i" eBut I never did
却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' z6 q( X6 w( H7 d只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
. Q7 ?/ S. d- g+ i) t, vIf today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% S& A9 o' n4 r: ]5 K8 H3 D今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
8 @+ c2 s9 Q+ o8 t7 Q! K! uI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
' n+ j0 j4 q$ d1 F! Y, E; J$ eCan I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

5 N2 S$ A6 G) S9 G$ s; u  ^Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它托付于你？
! o5 L5 |2 I( o# z4 u0 z( c9 DEntrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
5 X. S1 W1 ?; G8 V  v* n. f+ W% H; h老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
5 Q* z5 [( {) q( g老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
9 U( U. w1 u  G* U9 n, Mvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

! c2 m. }. \! i6 A' r* |不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。